I discovered your blog a while back and I have enjoyed your writing and I do like your style but come on man. Why are your posts so long? That’s a lot to read in one sitting. Why all the run on sentences and big words? Why can’t you just say it in one paragraph?
Do you really have to drag everything out so much? You write pretty good but who has time to read all that? Add more pictures or links or something. Make it interesting but keep it short. Come on.
Pull it in a notch and you’ll get more regular readers.
Dear (NAME DELETED),